In our tutorial we went over all our updated ideas with Rachel and decided that we'd focus on the Liminality one. However we expressed our concerns about filming under water / giving the impression it's under water and how we would carry this out. We were told not to worry as much about that and work on the idea, then try and work out how to carry it out in the best possible way - which I think is a good plan to start off with. 

Rachel has given us the following tasks to complete for the next tutorial in order to help us progress :

It was also emphasised to us, to not create a replica of the poem, but to show our own ideas in the video instead. 

We were also given questions to think about :

Plan

The plan at the moment is to individually look through the poem and analyse and conceptualise it. We will then have a meeting and discuss what we found with each other to come up with a final idea that we can all visualise clearly. We shall also be thinking about the questions and researching more on the idea and other works that may connect.